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Burn - hazeleyedpanda by ~hazeleyedpanda:iconhazeleyedpanda:



I wonder what you think of me now
and if you even care...
but more than that I wonder why you took me down a path
that lead me absolutely nowhere.
Im so afraid to leave this way,
that give it a few weeks and you wont remember me.
I never want you to think of me as
that girl from a far off memory.
You talk of tomorrow as if the present
means nothing at all to you, even now.  
Im sure it wont be hard for you to forget,
You'll easily move on, somehow.
I'll be the one holding
the short end of the stick once more.
It seems like only yesterday
that I felt this way before.
Why do you lead me in circles?
why do you never learn...
that lighting a flame in my heart
will eventually cause me to burn.
©2004-2010 ~hazeleyedpanda
:iconhazeleyedpanda:

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I love him, but only on my own.

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:iconmiseria-cantare:
this is a good poem the only things that bothers me is this: free form poems are fine: you dont seem to have a set meter to your poem, which can be very cool, except that when u have a rhyming poem, it really should have a set rhythm, or the rhymes dont flow, and it sounds pushed.
i can see potential tho
definite potential.
- -

“Let the dream begin,
let your darker side give in
to the power of
the music that I write –
the power of
the music of the night…”


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:icontimrkey:
why do you never learn...
that lighting a flame in my heart
will eventually cause me to burn.

--
you feel abstract inside of me.

These schnozberries taste like schnozberries!

I probably hate you so shut the fuck up
:iconbrown-eyed-girl:
i know exactly what you feel.

and it does burn.

--

and as the summer's ending,
the cool air will put your hard heart away.
you were so condescending...
and this is all that's left:

scraping paper to document.
i've packed a change of clothes and it's time to move on.
-d e a t h CAB
:icondramafreak89:
I can totaly relate to this poem.
:iconblueyedbiff:
gotta love it. everyone else does.
:iconblueyedbiff:
let it burn, let it burn








let it burn.

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